Subjects Witness Stand
Mock Trial · Session 6

WitnessStand

English 6 · Second Term Exam · for Cara

Every topic on your pointers is really one question: who is talking, and can you check what they said? A prediction, a summary, a point of view, a persuasive piece, a propaganda line — each one is a claim walking up to the stand.

Nine exhibits, each with a rule the court applies. Finish an exhibit and its seal lights up top. Then comes the hearing: Multiple Choice, Identification and Sentence Construction, the three types printed on your pointers. 50 points.

Call the first witness →
Part I · Reading — Exhibit 01

Making Predictions

p. 101 · Predicting Outcomes

A good prediction is never a guess. It is a small argument, and it has to cite its sources.

The rule
CLUE + KNEW

Your book says a prediction comes from the clues given in the reading material, or the things one already knows or has experienced. So two sources, every time: the CLUE on the page, and what you already KNEW about how people behave. One without the other is a guess.

01Seal 01 — Clue & Knew. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part I · Reading — Exhibit 02

Making a Summary

p. 118 · Making a Summary & Summarizing Story Events

A summary is the shortest honest version. Honest is the hard part — the moment you say what you felt about it, it stops being a summary.

The rule — for a story
WHEN · WHERE · WHO · then B·M·E

Your book’s own order: begin with when and where it happened, then the characters the story revolves around, then retell the plot — Beginning (setting and characters), Middle (the problem and how it is resolved), Ending (what became of the characters). You may add what you learned from the characters’ actions last.

The rule that costs points
No I. No you.

“A summary cannot include any opinion. It must be written like someone is telling somebody about the text. This is written in the third-person point of view. The pronouns I and you are not used in summaries.” If your summary has an I, a you, or the word beautiful, cross it out.

02Seal 02 — When, Where, Who. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part I · Reading — Exhibit 03

Point of View

p. 147 · Point of View — four types

You lost four points on this in Quiz 2. It is the heaviest exhibit here, so it is drilled hardest.

The rule — four doors
I · YOU · ONE MIND · ALL MINDS

Check the pronouns first, then count the minds.
I → first person (I, me, my, we, us, our, myself).
YOU → second person (you, your).
he/she/it + ONE MIND → third person limited.
he/she/it + ALL MINDS → third person omniscient.

The one-lamp test
One lamp, or the ceiling light?

Limited and omniscient use the same pronouns, so pronouns cannot separate them. Ask instead: whose thoughts does the narrator get inside? Only one character’s — one lamp, limited. More than one, including people the main character cannot hear — the whole ceiling light, omniscient.

TypePronounsYour book’s example
First personI, me, my, we, us, our, myselfI was still half asleep when the plane completely landed.
Second personyou, yourYou did not see this coming. What are you going to do now?
Third person (limited)he, she, it — one mind onlyShe got her luggage from the overhead bin, swarmed in the aisle, eager to get off the plane.
Third person (omniscient)he, she, it — knows everythingShe ran and hugged her mother… washing away the longing she had for her daughter all these years. (we are now inside the mother’s feelings too)
Author’s point of view / stand — a different thing
Whose eyes vs. whose side

Narrator’s POV = who is telling the story. Author’s point of view or stand = “the author’s way of considering something — their opinion, feelings, or thoughts about a particular idea.” The two mothers in your book say opposite things about the same beggar; same scene, different stand. Point of view is used to influence people and how they think.

03Seal 03 — Four doors. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part I · Reading — Exhibit 04

Persuasive Text Type

p. 123 · Using Persuasion to Express Ideas · and Ms. Garcia’s L6 deck, Features of a Persuasive Text

Two things get asked here: what a persuasive text is built from, and which technique a line is using. They are different questions — keep them apart.

What it is built from — your book’s own sentence
ARGUMENT → EVIDENCE → CONCLUSION

“To persuade means to convince, and to be able to convince, you need to express your argument and provide evidence to support your point and a conclusion to summarize your expression.” Three parts, in that order. If an item asks what a persuasive text needs, that is the answer.

The three techniques — Ms. Garcia’s deck
FEEL · ASK · PROVE

FEEL → Emotive language: words that make the reader feel something.
ASK → Rhetorical question: a question that does not need an answer.
PROVE → Facts and statistics: numbers or evidence that make the idea believable.
One question sorts any line: is it making me feel, asking me without wanting a reply, or proving something with a number?

TechniqueWhat it doesMs. Garcia’s example
Emotive languageUses words to make the reader feel something — it creates empathy.“Poor, helpless animals are suffering every day.”
Rhetorical questionA question that does not need an answer — it makes the reader think.“Do we really want to destroy our planet?”
Facts and statisticsUses numbers or evidence to make ideas more believable — it builds trust.“90% of students perform better after exercise.”
04Seal 04 — Bring your CREW. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part I · Reading — Exhibit 05

Facts and Opinions

Statements of fact & opinion · plus your notebook table

Two of your four misses in Quiz 1 were here. Both were the same mistake: picking the sentence that sounded nicest instead of the one that could be checked.

The rule
CHECK IT, or FEEL IT?

Can somebody go and check it — records, a count, a measurement, a date? That is a statement of fact. Does it need somebody’s taste or judgment — best, exciting, enjoyable, most interesting, beautiful? Somebody feels it. That is an opinion.

The trap that catches everyone
A fact can still be false.

“A statement of fact can be verified and proven to be true through objective evidence.” Verified — not correct. “The trains are always late” is a statement of fact that may turn out false; your book says so outright. So the test is never “is it true?” It is always “could someone check?”

FactOpinion
NatureObjectiveSubjective
What it doesStates realityInterprets reality
TestingCan be verifiedCannot be verified
Sounds like300 registered participants · 5,000 books · serves lunch at 11:30 a.m.the best in the school · very enjoyable · the most interesting things to study
05Seal 05 — Check it or feel it. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part II · Language — Exhibit 06

Noun, Pronoun and Adjective Complements

Your notebook · Quiz 1, II.A

Three names, one procedure. Do the procedure and the name picks itself.

The rule
LINK, then LOOK.

LINK — find the linking verb: is, am, are, was, were, became, becomes, feels, seems, looks, remains.
LOOK — at the word right after it that tells you about the subject.
A noun → Noun Complement. A pronoun → Pronoun Complement. An adjective → Adjective Complement.
Your notebook’s wording: nouns, pronouns and adjectives are used as complements to add information about the subject.

What Ma’am actually wants on the paper
Underline two things, not one.

The Quiz 1 instruction was corrected by hand to read: underline the subject AND underline the linking verb, then write the complement type. Two underlines, then the label. Losing a point for a missing underline is the cheapest point to lose.

Sentence (from your quiz)SubjectLinking verbComplement
Maria became a leader after helping her classmates.MariabecameNoun
The pupils were proud of their team.The pupilswereAdjective
The pupils became members of the community.The pupilsbecameNoun
The person who organized the donation drive was he.The person…wasPronoun
06Seal 06 — Link, then look. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part II · Language — Exhibit 07

Propaganda Techniques

pp. 117–118 · Name Calling, Glittering Generalities, Transfer

Two of your Quiz 1 misses were here, and both were the same swap: you called an insult Transfer. Three B’s fix it for good.

The rule — three B’s
BAD NAME · BIG WORDS · BORROWED BADGE

Name calling = a BAD NAME pinned on a person or an idea.
Glittering generalities = BIG WARM WORDS with nothing behind them.
Transfer = a BORROWED BADGE — somebody else’s respect, authority or prestige lent to the product.
Ask one question: is it attacking, glowing, or borrowing?

TechniqueWhat it doesYour book’s examples
Name calling (labelling)Denounces values, laughs at opponents, puts down ideas. Gives a person or idea an easy-to-remember pejorative name so the audience rejects it without examining what the label really means.“He is a misogynist.” · “No one wants to be with a bully.” · “greedy troublemakers” · “selfish and irresponsible leader” · “lazy and selfish student”
Glittering generalitiesConnects with the audience by speaking to beliefs and values that are dear to them, to create a favorable impression.“Don’t panic, it’s organic!” · “Eat Fresh” · “The Best Part of Waking Up” · “Let’s Go Places” · “hope, success, and a better future for every family”
TransferA symbol that carries respect, authority, sanction and prestige is used along with an idea to make it look more acceptable.“Trusted by Most Doctors” · “Recommended by the Association of Dentists” · “The Only Sports Drink of the Palarong Pambansa” · “Top Choice among Moms” · a respected doctor pictured beside a vitamin
Your exact mistake, written down so it does not repeat
An insult is a BAD NAME, never a badge.

Quiz 1, no. 16: a poster calls an opposing group “greedy troublemakers” with no evidence. You wrote Transfer; it is Name Calling. Transfer always lends something respectable — a doctor, an association, a national sports event, a flag. If nothing respectable is being borrowed and somebody is being called a name, it is Name Calling.

Quiz 1, no. 19: “Our brand represents hope, success, and a better future for every family.” You wrote Name Calling; it is Glittering Generalities. Nobody is attacked — only big warm words, and no evidence behind any of them.

07Seal 07 — Three B’s. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part II · Language — Exhibit 08

Compound-Complex Sentence

p. 123 · Using Compound-Complex Sentences

The quiz format is always the same: three ideas, four candidate sentences, one correct combination. There is a pattern, and once you see it the item takes ten seconds.

The rule
TWO STAND, ONE LEANS.

A compound-complex sentence needs two independent clauses (each can stand alone as a sentence) plus at least one dependent clause (it leans — it cannot stand alone).
Your book’s model: Jill is teaching in Japan (independent), and she is frustrated (independent), because she feels like teaching in vain (dependent).

The ten-second test on a multiple-choice item
Hunt for a LEANER and a JOINER.

Leaner words (start a dependent clause): although, even though, because, when, while, since, after, before, if.
Joiner words (join two independent clauses): and, but, or, so, yet — or a semicolon.
The right answer has both, and cutting the sentence at the joiner leaves two pieces that each make sense alone. In all four Quiz 2 items the correct choice looked like:
[Although / Because …], [full sentence], and [full sentence].

Quiz 2 itemCorrect combinationShape
no. 11Because the examination was difficult, the students reviewed their notes, and they finished the test confidently.leaner + stand + and + stand
no. 13The rain continued throughout the afternoon, but the football players stayed on the field because they wanted to finish their final practice.stand + but + stand + leaner
no. 14Although some members were nervous, the class prepared a presentation about environmental protection, and they delivered it successfully.leaner + stand + and + stand
no. 15Because the school library was crowded, several students needed a quiet place to study, and the librarian opened another reading area.leaner + stand + and + stand
08Seal 08 — Two stand, one leans. Answer both items to stamp it.
Part II · Language — Exhibit 09

Transitive and Intransitive Verbs

p. 151 · Using Intransitive Verbs

One question, asked after the verb, settles every item in this section.

The rule
Say the verb, then ask “WHAT?”

If the sentence answers — there is a word receiving the action — the verb is TRANSITIVE.
If nothing answers, the verb is INTRANSITIVE.
I thanked — whom? the staff → transitive.
I answered — what? (nothing; only worriedly, which is how) → intransitive.

Your book’s own definition
A direct object receives the action.

“Intransitive verbs do not need direct objects (or words that receive the action of the verb) to complete their thoughts.” So the test is not whether words follow the verb — it is whether any of them receive the action. Across the information desk and at 4:00 in the afternoon tell where and when, not what. Those verbs stay intransitive.

SentenceVerbAsk “what?”Type
The staff apologized and left.apologized, leftnothing receives itIntransitive
I sat across the information desk.satacross the desk = whereIntransitive
The check-in counter opened at 4:00.openedat 4:00 = whenIntransitive
Carlo reviewed his notes carefully.reviewedreviewed his notesTransitive
The players disappointed their coach.disappointeddisappointed their coachTransitive
09Seal 09 — Ask “what?” Answer both items to stamp it.
The hearing

PAGSUSULIT

Three parts, exactly the types printed on your pointers: Multiple Choice, Identification, and Sentence Construction. 50 points. Part I opens with a passage you have never read — that is the real test.

Bahagi I · Multiple Choice

Choose the letter of the correct answer. 25 points. Items 1–7 are about the passage below.

The Acacia by Gate 3

A fresh case — you have not seen this one before

For as long as anyone at San Roque Elementary could remember, the old acacia had stood beside Gate 3, dropping its small yellow flowers on everyone who passed underneath. In June the school announced that the tree would be cut down to make room for a covered court.

Miguel, a Grade 6 pupil who ate his lunch under that tree every day, did not take the news quietly. He wrote a letter to the principal arguing that the acacia should stay. The school needed shade more than it needed cement, he wrote. He had counted the pupils eating under the tree one Friday: forty-one of them, because the canteen seats only sixty and the sun outside was merciless.

He ended his letter with a question he did not expect anyone to answer: Who will give the Grade 6 pupils shade when the acacia is gone?

Not everyone agreed. The basketball team pointed out that practice was cancelled eleven times last rainy season, and that a covered court would also serve as the venue for the Linggo ng Wika program. Some of them began calling Miguel and his friends “the tree huggers who hate sports.”

Miguel read the team’s reply twice. Although he still believed the tree mattered, he walked to the empty lot behind the canteen and measured it, and he found that a court would fit there with four metres to spare. He rewrote his letter. This time he asked for both.

In November the court rose behind the canteen. The acacia kept dropping its yellow flowers on Gate 3, and Miguel ate his lunch under it, listening to a basketball bouncing somewhere behind the building.

Bahagi II · Identification

Type the term being described. Spelling is forgiven; the term is not. 20 points.

Bahagi III · Sentence Construction

Write the sentence yourself. 5 points.

Read this first. A page cannot judge whether your sentence is beautiful, so it does not pretend to. What it checks is the structure Ma’am is grading for — the leaner word, the joiner, the linking verb, the banned pronouns. After you submit, a model answer appears. Compare yours against it, and let Ma’am judge the meaning.

Verdict
0
out of 50 points
Gallery Seat
You are watching from the back row. Tap every card, read every rule, then come back.
Exhibits 0/20 · Multiple Choice 0/21
Identification 0/15 · Sentence Construction 0/5

The night before

One screen · every rule, word for word

  1. 01 — CLUE + KNEWA prediction cites two sources: the clue on the page, and what you already knew. Twists are allowed if they stay related to the original plot.
  2. 02 — WHEN · WHERE · WHO, then B·M·EAnd the rule that costs points: no I, no you, no opinion. A summary is written in the third-person point of view.
  3. 03 — I · YOU · ONE MIND · ALL MINDSPronouns split first and second person. For third person, count the minds: one lamp is limited, the whole ceiling light is omniscient.
  4. 04 — ARGUMENT → EVIDENCE → CONCLUSIONTo persuade means to convince: express your argument, provide evidence to support your point, and a conclusion to summarize it. The three techniques are FEEL · ASK · PROVE — emotive language, rhetorical question, facts and statistics.
  5. 05 — CHECK IT, or FEEL IT?Checkable → fact. Needs someone’s taste or judgment → opinion. And remember: a statement of fact can still be false — the test is whether it could be verified.
  6. 06 — LINK, then LOOK.Find the linking verb, look at what follows: noun, pronoun, or adjective complement. Underline the subject and the linking verb on the paper.
  7. 07 — BAD NAME · BIG WORDS · BORROWED BADGEAttacking → Name Calling. Glowing with nothing behind it → Glittering Generalities. Borrowing somebody respectable → Transfer. An insult is never Transfer.
  8. 08 — TWO STAND, ONE LEANS.Hunt for a leaner (although, because, when, while) and a joiner (and, but, or, so) with a full sentence on each side of the joiner. Usually: [Although…], [sentence], and [sentence].
  9. 09 — Say the verb, then ask “WHAT?”Something receives the action → transitive. Nothing does → intransitive. How and where and when do not count.
  10. Quiz 2 no. 12 — settledThe key is B. C fits the rule as well, so that item came down to meaning. Your D failed because and managed her time carefully has no subject of its own — that is a compound predicate, not a second independent clause.
Back to all subjects

Court is adjourned. Run it again in two days — the second run is where it sticks.